Love or Words  ( interpretation at death )

Love or Words ( interpretation at death )

A Story by AcasualPawn
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A short story of confession of writer through words................

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He could still remember, that final time when Sara was rejected by him. With a wounded heart and broken spirit, in a distracted state of restlessness, there was an attack on her way back home, and the young woman finally passed away like a diminishing fragrance.

When he received the news and had immediately rushed over, he was still a single step too late at the very end.

At the moment before her death, that woman had gently laid in his arms. She had said to him, “john, should there be another life…… should I meet you once more, I hope that you will carefully…… take a look at me. I look nicer than a Pen!”

“John, to be able to die in your arms, I am very satisfied……” Those were the last words of Sara……,
you were not satisfied. You had regrets. Otherwise, why would you have tears at the corners of your eyes? On the gentle face of the girl who had already taken her last breath, two clear droplets of tears suddenly dropped…… She had forcibly pretended to put on a smile on her deathbed, afraid that he would be hurt……

Two droplets of clear tears, had instead at that very moment smashed and shattered his heart! From then on, his heart would be covered in dust!

But, now when his death is a few steps ahead, holding a pen in his hand the only words that are in his mind are:--


“A lifetime is not a gentle word,
words are a lifetime of bitterness;
I will write for you in next lifetime,
bitter or not I will write a next lifetime!”....

© 2017 AcasualPawn


Author's Note

AcasualPawn
Well, i used some sources for help.....

Readers can assume that to execute last 4 lines above stuff is written..

Reviews and comments are welcomed..

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love this piece. i am in love currently and tell him every chance a girl can get. we we're teenage lovers and separated for over 25 years. now i'm 49 and fine all across my board. I know the price of true love. there is none.

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Meaning of love defined in a lucid manner.
Loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hey, Death or Pig whatever you identify now, I embrace your new avatar indentity.

I found your story moving, something that embodies love. Keep writing, my Buddy.

Fifth line, I think you need to capitalise John

Posted 7 Years Ago


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The last four lines are tricky to understand. Sad and heart touching write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

There is so much depth in these lines, no doubt why I couldn't understand them because you know when.. read more
AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

Yes, the expert writers are different though they know how to involve maximum readers,. Thankyou na.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺
wow, the emotions in this piece are just amazing. the writing was absolutely perfect. loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words darkmist..
Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

you're welcome
It is very good! The line about "look(ing) nicer than a pen" is very powerful; it tells just as much of a story as any other line in the story. Well done! Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words
Woah! It's really really good, I liked how you put so much emotions in such a small piece of writing, absolutely beautiful! By the way, loved the poetry in the end, too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words...
That was brilliant Mr. Pig!

:) Mesmerized

Posted 7 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words..
Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Always
:)

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Added on August 10, 2017
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