Rusted World

Dream of a blind kid comes true, but there is more to it.....

Darkness my phobia,
empty' isolated' dumb' rejected.
Sole possession of me,
my only buddy.

morning arises in darkness
night ceases in darkness..

My fantasy' dream' desire
to appraise & admire,
heavenly world entire.

May be god becomes kind,
with a letter i got donated eyes

But first thing i saw with my eyes,
are few words of advise.

THIS WORLD
IS SO CRUEL
AND I DON'T WANNA
SEE IT ANY MORE

Reviews

[miahstr]

Maybe thats why he donated his eyes...

[AcasualPawn]

Yes but,world differs according to opinions. Thankyou miahstr for passing by...

[Tony Jordan]

It would be a huge let down to see such after the longing to see. Great imagination PIG.

[AcasualPawn]

Well the world differs according to opinions.. Its just piece of advice from donar of the eyes...

[The silent girl]

Wow.. Thrilled
Amazing writing.
"INSPIRED"

[AcasualPawn]

Well my pleasure, to serve..

[Black Rose]

Omg I thought you were talking about the darkness that follow us around after facing the society or depression we have. But the ending was wow!

[AcasualPawn]

Thankyou black rose for appreciation

[Black Rose]

My pleasure :)

[lostinthewaves]

It is good to have a realistic view of the world, but reality is still up to opinion. Good poem, thank you for sharing :)

[AcasualPawn]

Yes you are right. Its up to personal opinion..... That's why he got only advice from doner of the eyes.......

Thankyou lostinthewaves for reading it.....

[Mr.Write]

For some blindness is a curse but for others it became a blessing. Good poem.

[AcasualPawn]

Thanks mr white

[Adam Light]

Good story. I like it. I love exploring darkness.

[AcasualPawn]

Me to thanks for passing by adam..

[EJ's Horror]

I feel your philosopical morbid picture of the world, and in truth behind all the beautiful flowers, mystic beasts and picture perfect landscapes, the world is a pree messed up place, keep writing my friend!

[AcasualPawn]

Thankyou ejheather for your review.
I tried to express a blind person's difficulties and desires. I know i cant express them. But expressed general overview.