Treachery of Nature

Breeze. Gale and tempest plotted against me......

Gentle breeze embraces me
Making me cozy
entwined me' my sense, unprotected.

Suddnely

Fiery Gale started stroking vulnerable me
Provoking my erect standing
Sustaining the sneak attack.

Equipped for next round.

But abruptly heard raging sounds
Its assault of savage tempest
Praying for precise juncture
To rip my firm footing.

Reviews

[Jiya]

The unexpected storm comes in every one's life. After all who can have a perfect life?
Keep writing!

[AYVID N]

I like the effect conveyed. The sudden turn of events. Twisted nature. Very well pictured.

[AcasualPawn]

Thankyou for your understanding...

[AYVID N]

Its a pleasure...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah! Thats just the opposite
But I liked the way you carved it along!

Brilliant work :)
Keep going!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Yes, both the gentle beauty and devastating force of Nature must be respected by us all. Lovely poem rich with vivid imagery and good form and flow. Effective separation of verses marking changes in weather. Well-penned!

[Elizabeth]

wow, this was really great.the two sides of nature has been very well described. i loved it!

[AcasualPawn]

Tnankyou darkmist for understanding...

[Elizabeth]

You're welcome

[wordman]

so we must stand strong against nature and it`s attacks on us

[AcasualPawn]

Nature can be gentle as well as savage... Depending upon on its form..... Example wind=breeze, gale, tempest, cyclone...

So



We enjoy nature and must fear it..

Keeping above words in mind we must perform our action...
Thankyou wordman for your review

[Minerva]

I enjoyed the word choice!

[AcasualPawn]

Its about nature wearing different masks and affecting humans in different way.
Breeze which is gentle in nature is enjoyed my many humans, but gale whose intensity of power is higher affect human differently, similarly tempest which is more powerful than gale is not liked by human.....

And second meaning was human felt breeze in cozy manner, gale affected its mind and made him on alert giving challenge to him and lastly tempest uprooted proud human....
Thankyou for review

[boobalajcushion]

I really like this, your style or writing is very interesting to me. I love reading how others write, as I'm almost compulsive with the way I have to have mine, so it's so refreshing to see others. Thank you for your comment earlier :)

[AcasualPawn]

Thanks for the review fellow poet

[Diane]

hmm not sure if this is about sexual adventures or dungeons and dragons. Good read!

[AcasualPawn]

Its about nature wearing different masks and affecting humans in different way.
Breeze which is gentle in nature is enjoyed my many humans, but gale whose intensity of power is higher affect human differently, similarly tempest which is more powerful than gale is not liked by human.....

And second meaning was human felt breeze in cozy manner, gale affected its mind and made him on alert giving challenge to him and lastly tempest uprooted proud human....
Thankyou for review

[Diane]

Thank you for the meaning! It was worth the read even though I was far off on the meaning. Enjoyed either way.

[AcasualPawn]

Thanks for passing by diane..

[DarkArtz 0703]

wow.... I love it!!!! this is so good

[AcasualPawn]

Thankyou DARKARTZ for your appreciation