Anticipation

When i was young, i looked forwad to life.
Filled with anticipation, walking in carefree strides.

Now my vitality is exhausted,
& Death has been hosted,

But still, my lost anticipation has revived
& my old mind is trying to derive,
What interesting is waiting for me in afterlife.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm going for the Eternal Forest with all the dogs I had in life. Thank God, no bugs!

Regards,
Al

[AcasualPawn]

I knew that, from your comment previous time on enternal forest....
Thankyou for your time my friend

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Great question , maybe you will still time to solved. Nicely wording and flowing.

[AYVID N]

Good one SSR. But I'd tell the old man to keep enjoying life. Not sure about the afterlife. I really like the rhyming here.

[Mrudula Rani]

After this journey, for the next one we will be given the ticket only when it begins. Till then it is a mystery! Your Anticipation is wonderful.

[AcasualPawn]

Yeah its truly a mysterious mystery

[Tony Jordan]

This reminds me of a friend who died of cancer. For 40 years of his life he was non-religious then when disgnosed he bought every book he could find in the local stores, on the afterlife (and he made a deathbed confessional to the priest).
Yes, I could relate to this DP.

[AcasualPawn]

Iam overwhelmed

[AcasualPawn]

Someone truly doesn't lost spark of anticipation, until the end

[AcasualPawn]

I think after death should finally freedom from binds