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A Poem by Deathless_Sorrow
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A shade weaves back and forth between the graves.
A slight blue glow in the folds of his robes.
The very essence of addiction compacted into little glass vials.
Pleasure, pain, beauty, perfection.
With just a flash of coin it can all be yours.
The quality's guaranteed, rest assure.

© 2011 Deathless_Sorrow


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Repo: The Genetic Opera? It's an obscure movie but this is exactly what it reminded me of. Its eerie, haunting and dark. The atmosphere, as with your others, is strong in this one. Again I would suggest continuing it. What do they have to give up? what do they gain?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 30, 2011
Last Updated on September 22, 2011
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Deathless_Sorrow
Deathless_Sorrow

Greenup, KY



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My name is Matt. I've come to a bit of a block recently and I'm not sure if I'll ever be able to drag myself out of it, so don't expect frequent posts. Thanks for reading. more..

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