Thoughts of a Suicidal Kid

I don't really know if these are the thoughts of a kid that wants to commit suicide, but it ran through my mind cause I am doing a research paper on suicide, so I had to write a poem about the subject

Staring down at this knife,
I wonder if I am doing the right thing.
My mind keeps saying that I don't need to do this,
But my heart is telling me otherwise.

I haven't always been like this.
There was a time when I was happy.
But, she broke my heart
And I can't live without her.

We were such a happy couple.
I wonder what went wrong.
That don't matter now.
All I know is that I need her to live.

I want her back, but I know it won't happen.
This is my only way out.
The pain is too much to bear.
It must end now.

Holding it tight in my grip,
I put it on my skin.
Sorry world, friends, and family.
There's no saving me.

Author's Note

Please put your true comments. I know that I don't know the thoughts of someone that has been suicidal. Well, I actually do a little cause I used to be suicidal at one point. But, I am changed. So, please post your true feelings about this. It would really mean a lot.

Reviews

[Spice]

very touching hun