Who Anger Really Is

This is how anger makes us act.

          Anger shows no mercy. He may be quiet, but just wait. He will erupt soon. When you least expect it, he will come at you, leaving behind bruises, bleeding cuts, and broken bones. He hangs with his friends, Greed and Frustration, in the back of your mind until they decide the time is right to strike. When someone comes along to make you happy, Happiness appears, along with her friends, Joy and Laughter. They battle it out, making you go from happy to mad every second. Eventually, someone must win. Anger usually wins and takes back control. He doesn’t like fun, smiles, and dancing. He would rather see someone getting hurt and beat down, stripped of all their confidence. Anger overpowers most of us. We just have to learn when to let him go and say hello to Happiness, cheering her on for her win.

Author's Note

Anger makes us one way, Happiness makes us another.

Reviews

[PokemonFan#1]

Very well writen! A great write. Keep it up!

[C.A.Jordon]

great similes, metaphor,writing style, tone, and word choice. this is also well done

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really strong and well-written - everyone can relate to this!