Devil of Love

I wrote this poem because it came to me when I was just laying down, thinking.

With every passing moment

My heart grows weary with sadness.

You walk past with your devilish smile,

Your beautiful eyes and posture.

Killing me, draining me of my soul.

Love is never true.

I fall on the floor, gasping for breath,

not wanting to be alive.

You see me, smiling, your eyes black with evil

One final blow of your words and I am done.

Dead on the floor, watching you stand over me.

I am now nothing but a sad soul that fell for your tricks.

The Devil should be proud for his son has enchanted another girl under his spell.

Nothing more than a ghost, I  fly up to the sky to join the other poor girls that you have killed

One day, we shall pay you back for your hurt.

You will never see it coming.

For now, however, we must let our scheming come together.

Author's Note

Please put true comments and don't fake what you feel please. I need honest opinions.

Reviews

[PokemonFan#1]

A magnificent dark poem! It was awsome. Keep it up!

[C.A.Jordon]

well written, similes, metaphors were well done as well.

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the way this is worded...Adds to the feel which was great. Well done.

[Tasha]

Wow, I could feel the thirst for revenge. Great work.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting beginning. Could be a good story. You have a storyline with many opportunity. Revenge is always a good story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really dark and love the end with the thirst for revenge!