Love of Despair

This is about a girl who wanted to marry her boyfriend but was cheated on by him and was hurt.

You told me that you loved me

That was all lies

You tore my heart out of my chest

Squeezing it, watching it bleed

 

I was vulnerable

So I trusted you

You took advantage of me

Love is just a word used to hurt

 

I watched you walk away

You left me bleeding

Now I lay on the ground

Pleading to die; for I cannot live

 

With every kiss, you stole my soul

With every hold, you drank my blood

You left me with scars of your love

There's no point of life if I am not alive

 

My eyes are darkness

My soul is black

There are scars on my arms

There's no turning back

 

I'm an empty shell

There's nothing left of me

My bones are broken

I have been forgotten

 

The Devil did his job

He showed me you

Now I feel the fiery pits of death

You killed death, there's nothing left

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem after my boyfriend broke up with me. I was sad, so I wrote this. I hope that you will post great reviews.

Reviews

[silentpoet]

All I can say is your heart definately was broken!! As mine is now and I relate so much to all you've written.Sad but beauty within words from the soul.. I felt every line because Its how I feel now.. loved it..

[Cherrie Palmer]

this is over-the-top (in a good way) just like your feelings when your heart has been broke// good job

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Now everyone can definitely relate to this. When the guy you loved breaks up with you, when the guy you are crushing on rejects you or goes out with another girl, or when the guy leaves you, it is one of the worse pains ever, but you have to move on.
Again, I love the emotions in your poem!