Craving Your Love

This poem is about a girl who longs to have her ex back, but she cannot have him for he is getting hurt by another while she is trying to save him from hurt.

Tears of blood

Run down my face

Longing for your love

Scared of what is to come

 

Of me and you

As you praise her

While she beats you down

And runs off with another

 

My heart needs mending

Every time you kiss her

Each cut, bruise, and break

Makes me crave you even more

 

My arms are slashed

My bones are broken

My body is bruised

This cannot be mistaken

 

I've heard that

Absence makes the

Heart grow fonder

Whoever said that never

 

Cared for someone as

Much as I care for you

Love can harm

Love can heal

 

Never would I have

Guessed that it could

Do both and make me

Crave you even more

 

Forsaken love is what I

Long for, thirsting for more

Until then, my dear

I shall cry my tears of blood

Author's Note

Please put your honest opinions. The girl in this poem did not cut or hurt herself. These are just metaphors, representing how she really felt.

Reviews

[Amber]

The sadness the girl is feeling comes across very well.

[Loner]

A total classic piece of poetry i must say ......

[Luchia Noname]

i love this it makes the point come across well :) i enjoy the way she expresses her feelings i know that feeling right about now the feeling of losing that person close to you... great job :)

[PokemonFan#1]

A beautiful, dark poem. I liked it. Keep it up!

[Shep]

To bad it would flow true like this poem with great power and heart felt ragevthat we all deal with understanding of is to come. Nicely done.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Excellent my dear! True love can hurt and you crave what you can't have! Wonderfully expressed!

[Margarette]

What a longing the person must have felt about her true love! I understand how one can become so sad after reading this. It is truly great with how you make the reader felt the emotions expressed.Good job and keep writing!

[Tasha]

this was so nicely penned. the tears of blood really did it for me, it was so good and so sad. wonderful. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

i think this is great, the tears of blood really provoke alot of thought. Nicely penned.

[-Scribe in Style-]

Reallly Dark! A world of obsessive love. A killing emotion. Good use of metaphors describing pain and heart break.