A Slow Friction

A Slow Friction

A Poem by Rachel Lieberman

Our close kisses...

A slow relief...

Our clothes all off...

A cool mist about us...

Our sounds of passion...

A slow echo...

Our bodies so close...

A slow friction...

Our skin beads with sweat...

A slow moment...

Our wandering hands...

A slow touch...

Our exploring mouths...

A slow lick...

Our sensual touches...

A quick release...

Our silent vows...

A sworn secrecy sworn...

Our...

A...

Love...

© 2010 Rachel Lieberman


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This reminds me of a secret love afair, that has to be kept below the radar. The way you broke up everyother line, to read almost like two poems combined, was a beautiful thing!
I think that this was more passionately sensual, then kinky or erotic. I fealt a lot of love vibe through on these lines.

This was an enjoyable piece to read!

Eternally Your's
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 16 Years Ago


not rly kinky hun just sexual. nice read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on March 11, 2008
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