Don't Eat That

Don't Eat That

A Poem by Rachel Lieberman
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another Hobo series poem =]

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Do you know what that is?

I think someone took a piss

5 days old,

Liable to grow mold

Is that going to stop me?

Wait and see

The life of the hobo is the life for me

© 2008 Rachel Lieberman


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Makes the 5 second rule crumble to dust. Such a harsh life the homless people of large metropolitan area's have. Scrambling through existance just barely able to survive. You paint a vivid image with this, that brings a small window of their life into our minds. Perhaps one day, people won't ever have to live at that level of life.

Thanks for sharing this one!

Infinity's Shadow

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 11, 2008

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