The Undead Army

fits of darkness all around
life and death are no longer separate
the city streets are to be found
and hungry eyes are again so desperate

they have no care to what they do
for they are hungry and need to find
human flesh to which undo
the humans pink and crazy mind

the people run and try to hide
they cry to be saved from doom
the creatures eat the underside
of the peoples skin under the moon

the undead army took over those who still had a life to live
now they feast on each other for that's all that's left to give

Reviews

[JRB]

CREEPY YET NICE WRITE

[JCP]

Nice job! Liked it a lot! At first glance, it can appear to be just a simple zombie poetry, but you definitely get what's really going on. Nice overall social commentary! lol good work, keep it coming!

[E.J. Michalec]

good write

[chaotic katie]

ZOMBIES!!!! lol this is really good

[sharon]

wow this is deep