Be Free, Butterfly

Be Free, Butterfly

A Poem by nora
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"Do you remember, butterfly?" -Secondhand Serenade, Your Call

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Be Free, Butterfly
 
Do you remember,
My sweet butterfly?
 
Those nights
The stars were glistening,
 
How we spoke
Of all things small and big?
 
 
 
Do you remember,
My great angel?
 
Those sunrises,
Arms embraced,
 
Smiling and whispering,
“Good morning, sunshine”?
 
 
 
Do you remember,
My valiant knight?
 
Those evenings
I would cry and scream.
 
You held me tight,
And promised your love?
 
 
 
Do you remember,
My handsome prince?
 
Those pretty words
Of comfort and love.
 
My eyes shining for you,
My mouth smiling for you?
 
 
 
Do you remember,
My enamoring chéri?
 
One night,
When the moon was glowing,
 
You packed your bags and left,
Taking peices of me with you?
 
 
 
Can you recall,
When that change came?
 
When my world collapsed,
And yours was re-built?
 
You are walking a path,
On which I am no longer welcome.
 
Look for that sunshine,
Who will light your way and lift your heart.
 
butterfly.jpg picture by xxmusicxluvrxx

© 2009 nora


Author's Note

nora
haha, i know all the butterflies are kind of random, but i like it :)
and im a little apprehensive about this one because its in first-person and i havent written like that in awhile.

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its really good, i like it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh, Nora! I love this one. I love the switch in point of views, between man and woman. I love the little french you included and of course that sacrificing ending: look for the one who will light up your world, for I am not that person.
That's a real tug on my heart.
Keep it up.
Cheers.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Hello :) My name's Nora. I like daisies because they're happy and friendly. I love music, mostly of the emo variety. I wish to be a writer. My favorite book is The Perks of Being a Wallflower. .. more..

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