This Nostalgic Ballad

"Your bitter goodbye is ringing through this quiet night, this idle hour just won't pass." -Daphne Loves Derby, Midnight Highway

 

This Nostalgic Ballad

 

 

His words rang through the night:

 

‘I will catch you when you fall.’

 

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And then she fell harder,

 

And faster than ever before.

 

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He was the one to push her,

 

The one to thrust her to the ground.

 

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And the night that she was broken,

 

She sang in a soft, nostalgic voice:

 

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‘Oh, this is the End.’

 

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Author's Note

its short, lol :)

Reviews

[Silvario]

sweet and simple, yet speaks volumes. very well written. love the format. nicely done :)

[hiralarious]

This was beautiful. I loved everything about it, even how short it was. I want to know so much more..but yet, I am satisfied with what I've been given.
Definitely a great piece(:

[Nyida Strong]

The briefness of this left me really wanting more. I think this could be expanded upon, or at least the idea could be. I liked the flow and the format. A good poem or story will make the reader want to know what happened and why. How was she broken? What happened?

Very good write.

N. Strong