Sorry Mom

just a rant basically

I know you see it differently than I do…

But I’m still here, mom, and I can feel it too

I know it hurts, but you’ve been strong

You’ve seen us through all the wrongs

Don’t give up on me now

I’m still your baby girl, with the curly hair

I still love you more than anything in the entire world

I’ve made some bad choices

But I’m still the same

Please, mom, don’t turn away

I may have a different life

But I still want you by my side

Even though we never see eye to eye

I know one day I’ll make you proud

I’ll be the daughter you always bragged about

 

Reviews

[Jessica Mai]

I can really feel this poem. This writing is deep and touched me. Really well done with this, I can feel the need to make your mum proud. I love this.

[Senseless whatever]

Sad and heartfelt. A fantastic emotional write, growing up and sadly apart from our parents.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very beautiful and the story was very good. Real love hold on in the good and bad times. My kids are back home and i don't complain. I worry for them. A mother love is always the strongest. We need to tell them how wonderful they are. I like the total poem. A very good ending for a excelelnt poem.
Coyote

[Sam Severn]

This is beyond beautiful!! This poem reads like you wrote it from the deepest part of your heart with the dream of building a bridge to your Mom. Your words of love n' faith that someday all will turn out right inspire me! ㋡