Orchestra: Insanity's Symphony

Discordant sounds of my rapid violin play

The mad songs for a demented listener.

Corrupt thoughts invade my sanity as the strings fray,

This bliss madness sets my heart on euphoria and lands on pure splendor.

Thoughts of bloody murder spill from my imagination

Conducting a bloody piece, with a slight chance of action; very slender

A true being of evil! yes, an abomination!

I can already hear the screams of the bleeder!

As the screeching of the violins grow, swifter and swifter

The wicked thoughts are becoming vivid-- so vibrant!

The cadence of my heart beats louder and crisper

And images of me dancing in my victims cartilage!

Oh!  how I loathe these horrid pictures,

Filling my brain with naughty thoughts

Oh! how I detest these forms of torture!

 As the violins begin a song filled with question and fraught.

Author's Note

Sorry for the abrupt ending, I was going to make the transition more smoother. But I realized that I would prefer a rugged ending; such as the violins screech.
There will be a second one, but for now just be honest.

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

I can picture the violinist's fingers bleeding to this!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oooo...this is amazing. I truely love the imagery that plays around my mind. =D You did a stunning job playing with words here. =)
Interesting message! Love this piece!

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Lovely... Oh sweet insanity, why am I drawn to you so? Becoming 'evil' and 'an abomination' and hating yourself for it... I know that feel. But like I think you said before, the world is cruel and wicked, so why not be more wicked and more cruel?

Good stuff. I like your work so far.

[Ruth]

I think the ending suits the poem perfectly!
Left me sitting tense actually! lol
Perfect!
xoxo

[DarkShines]

I didn't feel that the ending was too abrupt, i think it really helped tie it all together. Wonderfully done, great work.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is good.