And The Sky Was The Limit

Rain, rain come and stay

subside the flood for when I wake.

 

Trees, trees cover me

comfort me until I leave.

 

Lullaby, lullaby sing softly

until the bough breaks I will remain asleep.

 

Flood, flood down beneath

embrace me until I cease to breath.

 

Light, light please guide me to the place

where eternity is waiting

 

I silently pray before I say goodbye

As I dive into the sky.

Author's Note

Most people don't understand this poem.
If anyone has questions just ask me.
Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem is really dark.
I hope this is a two way trip.

[Jeremy Baker]

I really like the reversal of the usual associations the words create - great control and an assured style.

[Canicus]

this honestly reminds me of the tsunami over in japan. but I like it good write keep it up