Inspirational Paragraph.

Had a bad day, but a great epiphany.

Life is one huge emotional mind game. There are days we wake up with an empty heart wondering if we’re even going to make it. We get beaten to the ground over and over again, we get our hope torn from us, we scream at the top of our lungs to the sky hoping that the moon will fill the void that still remains.. But somehow through all the pain, through all the suffering.. These moments never compare to the seconds that take our breath away. The situations given to us that remind us of how beautiful life can be. Let go.. Detach yourself.. There’s too much beauty to quit. I live for moments like these… WE live for moments like these.

Reviews

[Bobbob]

"Life is one huge emotional mind game."
Matter of perspective.

"There are days we wake up with an empty heart wondering if we’re even going to make it."
"Make it"

"We get beaten to the ground over and over again, we get our hope torn from us, we scream at the top of our lungs to the sky hoping that the moon will fill the void that still remains.. "
Flowery words for, "You get pissed sometimes."

" But somehow through all the pain, through all the suffering.. These moments never compare to the seconds that take our breath away. The situations given to us that remind us of how beautiful life can be. Let go.. Detach yourself.. There’s too much beauty to quit. I live for moments like these… WE live for moments like these."

This is merely a suggestion at hoping for scenarios that inspire you. This implies that things will amazing things will happen to you despite any proactive, or reactive tendencies you have to stress.

It qualifies negative, self-defeating behavior at the worst. It, at best, qualifies the same of hard work.

This is generic. And the assumption that every man, woman, and child "lives", or bases their lives on a few moments of euphoria, rather than duty or discipline, is misguided.

4/10. Its generic, and so 5/10. I took away a point because although this could "help someone", it is, as I said, cliche as all heck.

[Noiz]

A nice viewpoint of the mundane repetition that most have to go through. This reminds me of how stuck I was at one point in life and how I thought there was no point in going on. This was a great paragraph to experience. Very nice work.

[Mary E Green]

So very true...

[*]

A topic well worth pointing out. Nice one.

[JCP]

Such a good quick synopsis of why it's all worth it; those few beautiful moments in life that we each hold special. Nice job!

[Macrory]

These dreary days are what allow us to appreciate the good ones. The Yin to the Yang.

[Courtney]

very good

[Reaching for the clouds]

This is amazing! Well done.

[EquivalentExchange]

Beautifully simple! And it's those very dark days that show us the true beauty of the good ones. You can't appreciate the sun without a little rain, or in some cases, a lot of rain.