I'm Trying.

I'm Trying.

A Poem by Rae

Look.
It's not quite as easy
as you may think,
pretending I don't care about you.

But at least I'm trying.

All she did
was abandon the girl code.
She knew I liked you.

I think you did, too.
You do, don't you?

Just leave me alone already.
I get it.
You want to be on my mind
24/7.
Mission accomplished, captain.

Are you trying to torture me?
You're doing a great job.
So thanks.
Thanks a lot.

Are you happy?
I hope so.

Because I'm not...

© 2011 Rae


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@Koty bell
Awh, thanks! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome emotional write i loved it sometimes things that happen to us inspire the best writing great job:))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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@Rosie
Uh, no? And, no offense, but I would like a little privacy from you at SOME point during the day...

Posted 12 Years Ago


AWESOME!!!! And is this inspired by real life?.... ;) *wink, wink*

Posted 12 Years Ago


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@Maddox
Thank you!(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your welcome!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was really good. I felt like I could relate to, like, the feelings. Yeah it was awesome, your good at writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Lol, thaaanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is awesome!!!!!!!! I

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rae

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