I'm Trying.
A Poem by
Rae
Look. It's not quite as easy as you may think, pretending I don't care about you. But at least I'm trying. All she did was abandon the girl code. She knew I liked you. I think you did, too. You do, don't you? Just leave me alone already. I get it. You want to be on my mind 24/7. Mission accomplished, captain. Are you trying to torture me? You're doing a great job. So thanks. Thanks a lot. Are you happy? I hope so. Because I'm not...
© 2011 Rae
Reviews
@Koty bell
Awh, thanks! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
awesome emotional write i loved it sometimes things that happen to us inspire the best writing great job:))
Posted 12 Years Ago
awesome emotional write i loved it sometimes things that happen to us inspire the best writing great job:))
@Rosie
Uh, no? And, no offense, but I would like a little privacy from you at SOME point during the day...
Posted 12 Years Ago
@Rosie
Uh, no? And, no offense, but I would like a little privacy from you at SOME point during the day...
AWESOME!!!! And is this inspired by real life?.... ;) *wink, wink*
Posted 12 Years Ago
AWESOME!!!! And is this inspired by real life?.... ;) *wink, wink*
@Maddox
Thank you!(:
Posted 12 Years Ago
@Maddox
Thank you!(:
Your welcome!!!!!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Your welcome!!!!!!!
This was really good. I felt like I could relate to, like, the feelings. Yeah it was awesome, your good at writing
Posted 12 Years Ago
This was really good. I felt like I could relate to, like, the feelings. Yeah it was awesome, your good at writing
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Lol, thaaanks.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Lol, thaaanks.
This is awesome!!!!!!!! I
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is awesome!!!!!!!! I
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 7, 2011
Last Updated on December 7, 2011
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Rae Southeast Nowhere, TX
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I'll start by saying that I'm a strong Catholic Christian. So if you plan to say rude things to me concerning my religion, I would thank you kindly to leave. I would gladly answer questions about our ..
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