Devastation of Reflection

Devastation of Reflection

It is a devastation
to the alteration
of the mind's destitute
illusions
painted onto
preconceived
resentment
granting a
versatile injunction and
clearing away the
smoke of
shattered reflections
dancing around
visions of normalcy while
surrounded by
condemnation
and transfixed on the
transformation
of adoration

Reviews

[icaros13]

It has been awhile since I have read much poetry, and I forgot how much I enjoy yours. It is like reading philosophy, at times... The perfect mix of vocabulary, intellect, and emotion. Excellent.

[Laura Maidah]

The "-ation" endings were a bit cheesy for my tastes. I felt a little stifled. Sorry. Not my favorite.

[Ellie Howard]

i really enjoy your writing very much, i appreciate all the vocabulary you use in all your poetry. Applause.

[MoriartyMesa]

A reader might think this was the larger piece of a bigger puzzle, the images are nice and the immediate stopping in flows to point out the main body.