Hazel Eyes

Hazel Eyes

A Poem by Deandra Dawn

Hazel Eyes

Hazel eyes
dancing in the
fire of moonlit warmth
a coquettish grin playing on her
soft pink lips
swaying her hips to the
beat of his
passion driven heart
circling him with an
intense hunger
Hazel Eyes
holding captive
his stare
bright eyes shining
magnetic
bringing forth light
to the darkest
depths of his soul
swinging to the rhythm
of his fingertips
tracing her curves
with a smile
Hazel Eyes
enchanting
lost in soft kisses
cascading
in multilateral elixirs
of decadent
lust

© 2012 Deandra Dawn


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This is very passionate and emotional, erotica. I like your flow of thoughts, playing with words and your imagery. I specially like this:
"fire of moonlit warmth
a coquettish grin playing on her
soft pink lips
swaying her hips to the
beat of his"
Thanks for sharing...Keep it up :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love the passion and desire in this one. The need to feed (so to speak).

Posted 10 Years Ago


Extremely erotic. Elegant and very beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This reminds me a Latino dance or something, awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i love the serene presence of lust in this poem and i really like the unique pattern of repeating the titl through the poem. i have never seen that before and i love it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A nice clean look at the erotic...decadent...maybe a little...but very tasteful.
You didn't have to reach far to express the meaning..I guess I like simplicity.
I liked this one.

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! Erotica, in its most beautiful form! One can feel the couple's emotions heating up to 'hot tamale' level; as they passionately caress one another!! Beautifully told!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful and beautiful poem. I like the use of Hazel eyes and the good story in the poem. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem, maybe since I have hazel eyes :)
Great flow!




Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such a emotional read....written so well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Deandra Dawn
Deandra Dawn

Orlando, FL



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My name is Deandra Dawn and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I also go by the name, Ravishing Raven, and I am currently reworking my website. What else is there to know when there .. more..

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