Recollection

Recollection

Recollection of past assaults
yielding ingenious to
indifference
incessant shrieking
following unbridled agony
a disciple of distinction
valor
unpleasantly reaching
a conclusion
of informality
a convenient disarray
of confusion
frantically searching
for an intelligent
word
to offset the
delusional angst
of a rabid encounter
within the reveries of a
distinguished individual
incapacitated by
their own denial
and drowning
in their
own
misunderstood
illusions

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The visuals are almost too many for me to count, but what makes me drawn to this is the flow feels like it can reflect someone in a hospital ward, battlefield, lone prairie home, someone sitting on a park bench at Penn-station. Any one and any where and of course..............the flow, the natural emotion, nothing is forced, the words set with so much detail.




Too late to say nice job?

[Brittany]

Great work here. Great word choice, flow, and phrasing. Excellent.

[D. L. Vaccaro]

Your work always pulls me in, makes me ask questions... makes me wonder... I feel like I'm part of all of it and none of it somehow... I can relate the the narrator, the subject, and everything in between... each noun a new persona for me to experience the piece through. I adore this.

[demon_days]

Beautifully intense and deeply emotional! A wonderful piece.

[Alex Vidmar]

Wow. I love this. Beautifully Written!