Agony

Agony

A Poem by Deandra Dawn

AGONY



Agonizing wisdom
giving way to a naïve mind
descending knowledge
formed from twisted lies
truth seeks a willing target
the tongue scorned by the message
impermissible values
forcing a hand in deviant perspective

© 2012 Deandra Dawn


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Often the least said the better. Especially when thinking about agony. Truth certainly does seek a willing target and there are plenty of those to be had.

Your writing is very good, deeply meaningful with an air of mystery. Nothing agonising about that!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The last line of this poem holds the most powerful meaning. It is amusing to see how deviants are deflected to a different path.
Well done xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aw yes a short poem ;) overall message clear and somehow you must be gifted because you managed to get both dots over the i!! (I so forget what they're called)

Posted 12 Years Ago


some poetry requires a shot of something for extra kick, not needed here. Well maybe a whiskey sour. but still I enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was just about to write "Something are better left unknown," but then I looked at Cathy Wattam's review, and I think I'll just concur with her. The reviewees have said the things I wanted; so I'll leave you with this: With agony comes healing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wisdom can lead us into a good places. Lies can make any truth fade away to memory. I dislike liars and people who can tell the different between a lie or the truth. I like the closing lines. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


very good

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very understanding of agony within thoughts of precise feelings of someone has felt. Very Good

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved everything about this..form, rhythm and intensity all in so few words..Well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong thoughts and deep emotional turmoil...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Often the least said the better. Especially when thinking about agony. Truth certainly does seek a willing target and there are plenty of those to be had.

Your writing is very good, deeply meaningful with an air of mystery. Nothing agonising about that!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 24, 2012
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Deandra Dawn
Deandra Dawn

Orlando, FL



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My name is Deandra Dawn and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I also go by the name, Ravishing Raven, and I am currently reworking my website. What else is there to know when there .. more..

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