Essence

Essence

Your solicitous sophistication
manifests an insensitive
absolution
an ultimately fruitless
endeavor
packaged with an uncontrollable
anger
towards truth
meaning..
the very essence of
what is
not what could be
or what has been

Author's Note

Again....still a work in progress

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I feel like these may be the words of a Psychologist/Dominatrix, something about it brings me a vision of a woman with her hair tied neatly back, suit, writing, pad, riding crop for the patient just in case he needs a healthy reminder.

[Coyote Poetry]

The what could of been and what is? That is the question of all of us toward life and chance. If I could go back in time. I may have a better life? This is very good poetry. Open the door to thoughts and ponder the decision of life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Monica]

Well done! I really enjoyed this. I love the feel of your words...

[Ashley Lynn]

When reading it, it's almost as if the reader glides along with the words. Very nice. Thumbs up on your choice of words and the flow of the piece.

[icaros13]

I love how I get the feeling of falling when I read this. Great word choice as well. Well done.

[Southern Cross]

Sounds like a person I'm all too familiar with..very well done with the twists and turns of your voice

[Chris]

An intriguing presentation of a "person" still in progress.

[Angelic Surrender]

This is a great work
"the very essence of
what is
not what could be
or what has been"

Love this.

[pinpen]

Such a wonderful write here

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully described, I think you've captured the "Essence"
amazingly well, no pun intended to the essence reference.