Excuse

Not so much a poem...more of a statement...

EXCUSE


Common courtesy would tell you to say, excuse me.  Pretentious manners lost on a world of spoiled....articulates?  No, neanderthals, nevertheless, standing upright attempting to form an intelligent sentence, when I can say two sentences with but one look.  Face your future condemnation or turn to the past to rebuild your borderline mannerisms.  The choice is yours but the right choice is about to put you in your place.  So much so you will wish for a single redeeming moment to simply say....excuse me.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I know the main point is not to be funny, but I laughed cause made me think of one person slamming a shopping cart into another person and continuing to just walk, text, and sip of some $9.00 cup of coffee, living in their perfect world with out a notice or care for others.

[Blacke Hennessey]

LOL!!! Excuse me, but I loved this so much esp the end. Great stuff!

[BlueJay]

I've never seen anyone's works about polite conversation before. This is a first for me and might I add that it was such brilliant work as well. I also like to say that saying "excuse me" never killed anyone either.

[Southern Cross]

It even goes beyond the excuse me..the thank yous ..the i love you but goodbye..It's the hibernation of courtesy ...perhaps it will emerge next winter

[Angelic Surrender]

Manny people seem to have lost there manners and behave like the brutes and neanderthals you speak of. I thought the world was supposed to be evolving. I like it

[Distant horizons]

Did someone cut in line in front of you? :-D
Manners are free, maybe that's why the me generation think they are worthless
PS. . . Or is this another intrigue with hidden meaning? :-)