Mirror

In the mirror she saw no recognition,

no resonating desire of critical opinion.

Only a veteran of substantial pain

with a detachment of emotions...

lost eyes...

A spellbinding recollection

of a masterful massacre

of ones beauty,

personality...

In the mirror there is truth.

In the mirror there is the spatter of

one's lost identity.

The mirror cannot tell you that you are 

beautiful

It can only show you what 

vibrance

 you could potentially hold.

Try to smile....

beautiful smile

in the mirror

Reviews

[Brandon Wernke]

A sad read. For me, the shattering of personality holds some truth. Rather, the massacre of it. I liked it, very much, despite the emotion of sadness it drew out. Powerfully written.

[Gee]

Mood dependant, the mirror will reveal many things but never the same thing twice. I look, not very often, and see the puzzled face of "Jesus, where did all of that time go".
Nicely written

[Deandra Dawn]

Thank you!

[3X3MPLER]

there is alot of mystery about the mirror that most people dont recognise...great work

[Deandra Dawn]

Thank you!

[James Alai]

"The mirror cannot tell you that you are
beautiful
It can only show you what
vibrance
you could potentially hold.
Try to smile....
beautiful smile"

wow. so good.

[Deandra Dawn]

Thank you so much!

[James Alai]

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