Downfall

Downfall

Capture the light within your eyes and

let down the armor.

An arrangement of fortitude so

graciously accepted.

Bittersweet.

A beggar of an oppressive nature,

redirecting his assault toward

the harshness of sheer reality.

The origin of which led him to the 

plunge....

a 

downfall.

Surrendering to their pleasures,

imagination ceases,

an admonition of false

realism

Reviews

[David Gabar]

Very deep and heartfelt, way to enlighten.

[Paul Pruett]

It takes time to let down the armour. All too often I find that I have had it up so long, its hard to bring it down and let someone it. Especially of late, too much deception in the world. And that so damages love.

[ANM]

From pleasure there is always pain.. Nice poem Deandra

[MoriartyMesa]

This must have had an influence of a Latin nature, Roman I think.

[J. Alfred Prufrock]

you have a very compelling philosophic voice here. well done