Warning

Warning

The words that had been spoken,

with sharp tongue,

painful tone,

left her feeling distraught.

The evolution of your warning

impeding a plaintive intent.

Your words piercing-

like daggers,

figuratively drawing blood,

endlessly corrosive.

Playing with intervals of marked

aggression

aggravation

apprehension

all ending with her begging for 

forgiveness.

Her sorrowful advances 

lost on terms of

nervous misdirection

Reviews

[Paul Pruett]

Pure, raw power. Your phrasing is really excellent.

[ANM]

She will not heed the warning... very well written!

[MoriartyMesa]

Words always have meaning, thought and something that can lead to a thousand thoughts, this however is as refined as a nice whiskey. A sting and truth.





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[Rob Santana]

Very straight forward and dark. Well penned.

[Deandra Dawn]

Thank you very much.