The Dreamer

THE DREAMER

The extraction of your spirit

in divine contempt.

A marriage of fictional actuality

coupled with a darkened reality,

seeded with imagination

endless....

to infinity....

an archway into the subconscious mind.

A galaxy of retreats

embedded into your dreams,

your nightmares,

amidst the screaming terrors.

The extinction of innocence,

terrestrial games

of stemming ambiguity

toward a dark matter,

never giving to the light,

never withdrawing.

Eyes remain closed,

eyelids softly fluttering

with small spasms of life

coming unto a

sleepless....

death

Reviews

[J. Alfred Prufrock]

i was drawn to this one by the title. it has a lot off really good imagery. you should experiment with making some of your poems more abstract; your use of pronounce impedes the flow here and there. but still it ia very strong thought provoking poem, that makes the reader stop and think. well done.

[Bill O. Writes]

You are a wordsmith. Astounding. I saw everything reading this.

[Paul Pruett]

I am always amazed how some poets can use language! I am in awe of your lyric. Truly. The manner in which you weave imagery is very wondrous. Excellent write. I am now going to have to explore your world more.

[Scott Metro]

A dark but serious description of the dream state...some times I have dreams that are so wonderful I have to thank the heavens to have felt what I felt within the dream...only because I do not get to feel such things in reality. Sometimes they are dark..sometimes twisted little conglomerations that seem senseless.
A bit dark...but that's OK...I like dark too...
Enjoyed it.
Scott