I Will Be Fine

I Will Be Fine

A Poem by Deaidre Newby
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I usually don't share my music publicly, but it was on my heart to share this one. It would be nice to get some honest feedback. Song title is Will Be Fine.

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I was working on a new song today. I am not sure how I feel about it. I usually don't share my music publicly until I know what I am going to do with it, but it was on my heart to share this one. It would be nice to get some honest feedback. Song title is Will Be Fine.
VERSE ONE
My ring faded in time
No longer mine
But I'm fine
I've taken the next flight
Left nothing behind
Yes I'm fine
Labeled it as a fling
It really string
Yet I'm fine
PRE-CHORUS
Even though I asked myself many times
Why did I wasted my time and....
CHORUS
Given you what was mine
Should have left you behind
When I saw all the signs
Still I gave you what was mine
But I will be fine
VERSE TWO
Drifted to a foreign land
Lost your hand
But I'm fine
Clock on the wall sits still
Realized its real
Yes I'm fine
Finally found the will
To let go
Walk out the door
Cause I'm fine
PRE-CHORUS
Even though I asked myself many times
Why did I wasted my time and....
CHORUS
Given you what was mine
Should have left you behind
When I saw all the signs
Still I gave you what was mine
But I will be fine
BRIDGE
I could have walked away
But each time you begged me to stay
Convince myself it won't be the same
I have no one but me to blame
CHORUS
Cause I gave you what was mine
Should have left you behind (you behind)
(Yes I saw, I saw) all the (warning) signs (all the signs)
Still I gave you what was mine (I gave what was mine)
I gave, I gave, I gave it away
But I will be fine
Yes I'll be fine
I will, I will, I will
I will be fine
Fine mmmmmmmmmm fine
Oooooo I'll be fine
I will (I will) I will be fine

© 2014 Deaidre Newby


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I think it is very awesome what you wrote:)))))))))))))

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the lyrics and would love to hear it in its full glory...once the song is ready let me know. Thanks for sharing...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 12, 2014
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Deaidre Newby
Deaidre Newby

Charlotte, NC



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Deaidre Newby embraces two careers – one as a songwriter and the other as a freelance writer. Both careers have allowed Deaidre a way to express herself poetic by painting pictures with words fo.. more..

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