Petals Have Fallen

Being available and supportive.

All your petals have fallen

Left you lumped and broken hearted

Like Niagara Falls your tears are calling

For a place of shade

Someone to come to your aide

Here I stand

Partly faded

Unsure of what to say

But I stay

To catch the floodgates of your tears

To catch all your fears

Your doubts

And cast them in the biosphere

So my dear

Rest

Rest your head upon my heart

And don't depart

For you know true love can heal any broken heart

No I can't replace

Or even erase those loving faces

But, if you continue to embrace

And lean on me to help, end your emotional race

And taste

Yes, taste my loving grace

Reviews

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A very loving yet emotional poem:) I loved it:))))))))))))

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is a very sweet poem, I love how it flows. It shows love toward someone who is hurting, which I like. The only thing that I would suggest to change is Partly fade to Partly faded, it would flow better that way in my opinion.

Good Job

[Bhumika Devkota]

Nice sweet poem. Cute in a way. Good job!

[Kurayami]

This is such a lovely poem. Kinda cute.

~Kurayami