Dear you

Dear you,
I wonder if you hear me,
For my screams not loud enough to wake those who are near me
For the silent depression is to the greater degree
But Ive been gone for quite a long while
So long, and ive been hidden by a smile
So long that my soul has left my body
So long, that i no longer cared about sorry
The word sorry i never did hear a lot
So little that for a while i forgot
Im counting the problems within the human life,
And im caught in the fight for what is right
Cause all i see is wrong,
Wrong in the way they preach religion,
And yet judge those who seem to be different
Wrong in the way that the color of our skin
Determines whether or not we deserve to win
Wrong in the way that my friends feel they dont fit in
Because every magazine claims you have to be thin
And wrong in the way
That we cannot say
That people are cruel
In the way they rule
But, am i wrong?
For stating my opinion?
For saying that this world is my opposition?
For saying that hate lead me to this condition?
For saying that society lead me to this position
I don't think so...
For i am one of many
Many who've fallen victim
To all those who chose not to listen
Before now i have never been heard
Cause my words flew away like a bird
But I'm hoping that this letter,
Falls into the right hands
The hands of someone who understands
Because this world is full of hate
And death is the only escape
And i lay here silent
Thinking how could a world be so violent
When cruelty and crime
Go together like lemon and lime
And children are screaming to those around
But no one ever even heard a sound
Cause no one chose to look to the ground
To see the ones who have fallen down
But i guess in a way, pain is alright
Cause in the end we were born to die...

Author's Note

If i have made any grammar mistakes please ignore them, and focus on my message? :)

Reviews

[Xander West]

lol. I hate reading my work and noticing a grammar mistake. It drives me crazy. But with other's, my mind flows with the story line.

I like your poem; so much truth.

[DeadlyVelvetRoses]

Thank you! :)