Dreams

Dream with care

 

Awake with sadness

 

I can not bare

 

For reality is heartless

Author's Note

Let me know what you think. Also let me know if I need to corect a word.

Reviews

[Kerri Hart]

short simple, but leaves the writer "dreaming"

loved it

[Hope]

Thank you! :)

[Kerri Hart]

no problem its tru!

[Skye]

As you already know, I try to go to sleep sometimes just to dream. I like this, a few lines, but still saying what was meant. I love the pic :)

[Hope]

Thank you!

[Skye]

You don't have to thank me, cuz.

[Serenity Faith]

No grammatical errors here Hope ^_^ Only a few words, yet the image is completely clear. I can relate. Wishing to sleep for a long time, feeling happier, safer in your dreams than in the real world. A saying I once made up. "Live in your dreams, they are your sanctuary, for reality is simply the nightmare." Very nice as always.

[Hope]

Thank you so much :)