Greatest work

Another poem. I enjoy making them.

Today is the day,

I do in fact say,

That I will advance,

Go far, say hooray.

Shall I see you there?

To watch me and stare,

At the grandiose work,

Which I shall prepare.

I promise it's good,

As well as it should,

It's my creation,

Knock knock on the wood.

It's my greatest work,

I'll say with a smirk,

Now come, gather round,

and see the artwork.

Do you enjoy it?

What?! It isn't s**t!

It's my best work!

It should be a hit!

I guess I have failed.

My skills were just veiled.

Behind my new luck.

Confidence derailed.

I will do better.

I'm a go-getter.

I'll practice real hard,

and find my answer.

Thank you for reading,

getting through this thing.

It must have been hard,

Thanks for listening.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kathrine Rethorn]

It has a nice sound, be careful in poems you rhyme, sometimes they sound forced. (Sometimes it cant be helped) If you notice your adding a stanza or extra line just to get that rhyme you are forcing. It would help to keep a pattern as well! But still its an amusing read! Very relatable which is also important! Keep it up!