Angel of Seduction

Poem about someone I recently met that I find so beautiful

Angel of Seduction

 

 

A beauteous angel,
Of such perfect imperfection,
Tragically bequeathed,
With wings of seduction,
Luminescent life,
A blossom among thorns,
The world uttered chaos,
At mere sight of her form,
Venomous whispers,
Addiction in her stare,
That brought my soul kneeling,
A sin no man could bear,
Such intoxicating rhythm,
Of dispassionate spell,
A colorless heaven,
Or a beautiful hell

Author's Note

This is copyrighted by walter scott morrison

Reviews

[Ebb and Flow]

Truly amazing! This is beautiful and alluring, and a tad bit forbidding. It's like she's everything and nothing someone has wanted all at once. Someone too good to be true, and someone who could ruin you. I love the rhyming and the flow this is wonderfully written.

Krystina

[hulsehodges]

Ummm. OK. Here's the thing. i want to BE this girl! lol. beautiful. The single use of the word "addiction" still has me reeling. Keep Writing. Please, keep writing!

[LeaMarie]

Sounds like you are describing me! :-) I would lean tword beautiful heaven though. Great poem.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Great description and imagery here.. I love the wonderment and am feel wanting even more.. its really good stuff.

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Yeah the whole point was to show the woman as both something beautiful and dangerous. As she was because I knew she was going to hurt me yet I couldn't look away lol

[Elizabeth]

The images are so vivid. I'm loving "blossom among thorns" and "colorless hell".