Angel of Seduction

Poem about someone I recently met that I find so beautiful

Angel of Seduction

 

 

A beauteous angel,
Of such perfect imperfection,
Tragically bequeathed,
With wings of seduction,
Luminescent life,
A blossom among thorns,
The world uttered chaos,
At mere sight of her form,
Venomous whispers,
Addiction in her stare,
That brought my soul kneeling,
A sin no man could bear,
Such intoxicating rhythm,
Of dispassionate spell,
A colorless heaven,
Or a beautiful hell

Author's Note

This is copyrighted by walter scott morrison

Reviews

[Ebb and Flow]

Truly amazing! This is beautiful and alluring, and a tad bit forbidding. It's like she's everything and nothing someone has wanted all at once. Someone too good to be true, and someone who could ruin you. I love the rhyming and the flow this is wonderfully written.

Krystina

[Priscilla Sayers]

How fabulous! This is a breath~taking write, I actually began to hold my breath at the end, then you deliver 2 very profound, thought provoking lines. They carry much strength Dear Poet!
Thank you for such a great creation to share!

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Thank you but I am mediocre at expression

[Priscilla Sayers]

No, you only believe that. Read it again with new eyes....

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I can't because it came from me. Do you like to read?

[Priscilla Sayers]

Love it! I love books to hold, pages, the scent, the creation built on pages and pages! A place where your imagination runs with the story and you find escape in doses!

[Walter Scott Morrison]

So do I.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Awesome!

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I need a new friend that will sort of help me along and push me when it comes to my writing

[Priscilla Sayers]

I can inspire:) I love to free flow and if ever you need to bounce ideas around let me know:)

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Add me on facebook if you like.
I get on there and I will send you some things that I write to bounce opinions off of. I don't post my literature on here only poetry

[Lily Mae]

Definitely a beautiful hell :) lol..x

[Yellow Butterfly]

You totally captivated my attention..... seduced by your pen

Love your questioning at the end of her demise.... stirred up that much emotion unable to banish her to to her rightful place of rest...

A great write... :O)

[Pebbles]

i like how youve written this well done :)

[Ruth]

Ooohhhh....nice! So many shades to everything, isn't there?! Beautifully direct and powerful love! xx

[Ladysue]

The ending of this made me laugh...this was beautifully written...exceptional flow...

[sheila russ]

Wow! you had me at the title "Angel of Seduction"...I really like this piece, beautifully written and I loved the ryhming...great job!

[Hello, Goodbye]

Just re-read this and think its wonderfully written.. the words you selected are precise and impressive.. and the imagery once again is stunningly felt.

[TBird J.]

Its as if she is walking straight off the page, even I am intoxicated with this woman that's inspired such words

[Dark Empress]

Beautiful! I love this piece. Amazing poem :)