My Other Half

A love poem.

No matter how far we are

somewhere underneath this star

beats the heart of my soul mate

who makes my heart palpitate.

Nothing can truly keep us apart

as we are connected at the heart

and with your every single beat

mine answers back to meet.

No matter where we may be

we are drawn together by destiny

as you are my other half it's true

completeing me and me, you.

Reviews

[Chris Taylor]

This poem has a good rhyming scheme and it's rhythm is easy to follow. I particularly loved the line:
and with your every single beat
mine answers back to meet.

That line was clever. Nice work. I can't wait to read more from you.

[Sleeping Maiden]

AWWWWWWWW.....wow... i adore this write!! It makes me yearn for that kind of love... i don't even know if it exists... lol. But who knows..
this kind of love is what's worth fighting for in life.. to be treasured and to give love and passion for that beloved... gosh.. such a dream hehee...
I love this poem! Great work dear!!

[Inyourshadow]

How beautiful as nothing so makes one complete as their soul mate. Love the gentleness, keep em' coming

[Kim]

Beuatiful heartfelt write, I like this alot!