Waking Me

A sensual love poem.

You wake me with a morning kiss

rousing my senses with sweet bliss

calling me your sunshine

making me feel so subline.

Aroma of coffee reaches me

opening my eyes so I can see

what awaits me on this day

seeing you my love, hoping you'll stay.

Let this morning reach such heights

as you bring me pure delight

your essence stronger than caffiene

your touch leaves me feeling so serene.

This is how I wish every day would be

when you are right here with me

teasing me awake with such sweet bliss

by waking me with a loving kiss.

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

Ok so a good laugh at me and my dirty mind, I read the title as Wanking Me and thought this was a masturbation poem :) serious then I read the poem and thought that it didn't fit but then I re-read the title and laughed out loud at work causing my security guard to look at me weird. I liked the write and understood it better after that!

[Rainbow-Ribbons]

WOW!!!! This was sooooo beautiful!!! I could feel the sweet love and tenderness in every line here!!! Laced with romance and sensuality; and with such a great flow and rhyme!!! Just awesome!!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love this. Ha ha, definately enjoyed it. =) Sensual, full of love, and sweetness..
I love it so!! Beautiful work.

[Raven Starhawk]

Remarkably penned, but then again everything you write is so marvelous. I wonder how you find your muse, but then I stay silent and just read and appreciate your words. ^^*

[Kim]

So beuatiful and sensual, I enjoyed this write.

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful and serene. I enjoyed this...xx