I've Gifted You

A love poem.

I've gifted you 

with such a small thing

yet holds unbelievable value

which is amazing.

Something that you could hold 

in the palm of your hands

would hold you cative

yet make no demands.

I've gifted you 

with my greatest treasure

so treat it gently

it's a prize beyond measure.

It is fragile 

so treat it with care

be ever so gentle

take it every where.

What ever you do

I beg you sweetheart

please do not tear

my heart apart.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

You hold my heart in your hand, beautiful and as always romantic. You offer the greatest gift anyone could offer their heart. I loved it, keep em' coming

[J Todd Underhill]

Some of the best gifts ever given are fragile and can be broken easily, this is a well put together piece that shows this!

[Moflo]

I think this functions amazingly as a love piece, very sincere very well worded. Nice job.