No Time

A sad love poem.

She waited all alone

hoping he would come once more

take her in his arms

and make sweet love to her like he did before.

His words were like honey

sweet and soothing to her soul

so intoxicating that she

willingly gave him full control.

She needed to be loved

cared for and protected above all

but all she got were a hope and a promise

that just as soon as he had time he would come to call.

Although she appeared so strong

on the outside to others

she was really fragile and delicate

at the mercy of another.

Everyone turned their backs

it seemed no one had the time too

leaving her heartbroken 

feeling totally desolate and blue.

Reviews

[AJ Kristiansen]

Beautiful description of love lost and how often others can not realise how deeply one is hurt by such an event... I particularly like "His words were like honey, sweet and soothing to her soul,vso intoxicating that she,willingly gave him full control." Well put... how often words have such a powerful effect on us... the deep desire for affirmation and adoration can push aside any reasoning to move on or the reality of a relationship. Well done!

[Inyourshadow]

Hey Sis I hate it when your romantic heart allows the quill to Penn
pain. This is so sad it truly tugged my heart and Made me feel saddened because the only comfort I can afford you are my words. Chin up and keep hoping he will arrive. Keep em' coming

[Susie Q]

It's very sad how we could believe the lies of another when we might be lonely. After we realize they didn't mean their words at all, we need to pick up the pieces and search for true love. Very good write.

[Raven Starhawk]

Darling lines are yours to compose as they have your signature at ever end. Lovely work.