My Destiny

My Destiny

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem.

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From the moment I was born
it was my destiny
to spend my life loving you 
and you in return loving me.

Each and every second
everything that I went through
was always guiding me
to my destiny with you.

The world revolves 
because you make it turn
the sun shines in the sky
because of you it burns. 

I would hang the stars
that shine bright in the night
to express my love
each a reason you're my delight.

My whole life has been
a testimony of my love to you
my heart an open book
that reads of love so true.

If there was only one thing
I could do before I die
it would be to show the world
how high you're love makes me fly.

© 2011 Daytonight


Author's Note

Daytonight
This is a poem written for a contest on AP.

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I love the final two stanzas the most, as are we not all open books to our loved ones always writing there our innermost fears and sweetest emotions. Love it, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It's six thirty on a cold, foggy November morning, but this poem leaves me feeling as warm as Summer. A superb job. There is not a word, nor emotion out of place. Simply wonderful and uplifting

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A beautiful poem, love each stanza, so perfect :)

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This is such a sweet, warm write. I enjoyed this so much. It's very lovely. Love your picture as well, it fits with the write.

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Daytonight
Daytonight

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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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