Do I Miss You More?

A love poem of longing.

Standing and looking out

across the vast ocean

thinking of you so far away

wishing you were closer

longing for you so much

yearning for your tender touch.

Where are you my sweet love

are you thinking of me 

as my thoughts are on you

can you feel my heart beat 

like the waves of the sea

pounding against the shore

or do I miss you more?

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe, very romantic and melancholy.

[J Todd Underhill]

wonderfully sensual write here another fine addition to your growing collection, have you published yet?

[Inyourshadow]

Time either you or he made a descision to fly and I mean more than in a plane I mean into one anothers arms as I hate it when you pen sadness Sis, you are far too good a romantic poetess for this. Love the poem even though it's sad, keep em' coming