A White Rose

A romantic love poem.

The softness of these petals

compare to your two lips

or even when you caress me

with your fingertips.

The fragrance of this rose

reminds me of your scent

seems it follows me everywhere

leaving a lingering hint.

The color ever pure

says our love is true

especially when I know

how much you love me too.

You are my precious gife

created just for me

one that I will always treasure

for all eternity.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Beautiful and such a lovely love poem. I agree that this is a great metaphor.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice metaphor!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is beautiful...lovely work..xx

[Raven Starhawk]

A darling sweet poem I surrender to.

[Inyourshadow]

Awww this is so tender so sweet, you really know how to melt a heart Sis, may this flower always bloom for you and make you happy. Keep em' coming