Does He Feel What I Feel?

A love poem.

Does he feel what I feel?

I wish he would let me know

to be aware of what he is thinking

how he is feeling.

I wish he would let me know

if I please him

or make him happy.

I wish he would let me know

if he still thinks I'm beautiful,

sexy and desireable.

I tell him so often

how much I love him

how amazing he is.

I tell him so often

how desirable he is

and how I want him.

I tell him so often

what I am thinking

and what I am feeling.

Does he feel what I feel?

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This is beautiful but also sad because one wants so bad to make their realationship work and is working hard at it, but it takes two to keep the chemistry going. You can't do all the work yourself. You have to give the other person opportunity to apply an equal effort. If they act like they don't care then its because they don't. So let them go then move on with your life, great poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A questionn everyone asks...and continue to ask on some level....this is a very nice reminder and great poem :)

[Inyourshadow]

Yes sorry Sis got overwhelmed by the poetic questioning lol. J is a lucky fella and needs to reaffirm his love as passionately as you have here, this is wonderfully honest and romantic, straight from the heart. Keep em' coming

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow, straight to the point. And truthful. Many women feel like this in relationships when it's the girl who's trying so hard and we question the guy's point of view... I agree with angelink. It does take two to keep the chemistry going. Though its often difficult to let go of someone we want and love...especially if the guy doesn't feel the same. But we just need to see that it's not over. Another guy will come and give us what we deserve. =D I love this poem. Wonderful!!! ^o^