Feelings

Feelings

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem.

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You make me feel 
like such a lady
so soft and gentle
feminine and sweet
and nothing else matters
when I'm with you
for you are my world
making me complete.

You make me feel
like such a vixen
when we are alone
and we turn out the light
sharing your desire
your wanting and need
showing your passion
all through the night.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Nothing like letting slip the guise of love to reveal the lustful need beneath. You capture both sides of the relationship and the mixture of feelings. Love the heat and the seduction Sis, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your heart is so delicate and yet by the might of your pen it channels such lovely words that makes you vibrant. Loved this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem with true feelings for
your lover.
Sweet, gentle and desirable,
just the perfect lady.
------Eagle Cruagh

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing like a mix of love n lust... they can coexist.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 17, 2011
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Author

Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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