Just Don't Know

A sad love poem.

Don't know if it's night or it's day

somehow seems I've lost my way

don't know if it's up or it's down

is this a smile or a frown.

When did wrong become right

should I give up and not fight

is this the bitter end

or should I stand and defend.

Should I just die or should I live

do I really have any more left to give

even though you're the one I adore

you killed me when you slammed the door.

Tell me how do I let go

when I still love you so

there is no meaning to life without you

and I just don't know what to do.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

full of emotion....... raw and real.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very enjoyable...emotional poem...great work :)