Our Heart's Band

Our Heart's Band

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem.

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Dulcet strains fill the air
romance blossoming everywhere
swaying together in perfect grace
gazing into your handsome face.

Deft movement on your feet
kisses shared ever sweet
fragance of roses fill the room
blend harmoniously with my perfume.

Falling in love again once more
but more deeply than before
waltzing together hand in hand
serenaded by our heart's band.

© 2011 Daytonight


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I love the passion here! The two hearts are definately shown well. =D I loved this! I enjoyed reading it. Wonderful work! Thanks for sharing. i love the word choices.. and it brings a picture in the reader's mind. =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful. And with a perfect, musical beat to it. I love it, from the theme to the picture. The wordplay to the love dripping from every, nectsar laced letter. Thank you for posting this. It does my heart good

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nice piece. Very subtle yet to the point. The picture goes hand in hand with your words. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Serenaded by our hearts band - beautiful imagery Sis you really capture the romantic theme perfectly. The music made by the beating of two hearts as one is gorgeous. Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love romance so I truly enjoyed this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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