Baby It's Cold Inside

A love poem.

Baby I know it is cold inside

something deep you try to hide

but please just open up your heart

don't let this frozen spot drive us apart.

I promise that I will not hurt you

I'll give you all my love so true

be everything you could want me to be

always be there for you too you see.

When you feel it getting cold my dear

that is the time to draw me near

let me melt all the ice away

stay with you forever from this day.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

I love the way you speak of warming his cold heart melting him into your arms no doubt. This is gentle and tender as love should be. Nicely penned sis, keep em' coming

[J Todd Underhill]

It's funny the more I read of your work, the more it reminds me of someone I know from another poetry site. I like her works as well, and I like yours just the same. Funny how two poetess can write so similar!

[Raven Starhawk]

Just the right tone for a lovely read. This is another well composed beaut.