From The First Moment

From The First Moment

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem.

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From the first moment I met you
baby you took my breath away
you captured my heart
from the very beginning.
You had me where it was
difficult to say things
as the butterflies in my stomach
were trying desparately to escape.
You told me you felt that way too
and we talked about how
new and wonderful this all felt
and you were so excited.
It is amazing how even though
a couple of years have passed
since we first met baby
when you speak you still affect me the same.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Another heart penned piece Sis, your final line says it all, how is it that those closest can so affect us with just their words. This is beautiful, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Awe such a sweet poem :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Aww, this was really sweet. I loved it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It's beutiful. It captures both a moment and an era. It touches the heart and soul. A wonderful poem. So glad you posted it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on September 30, 2011
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Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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